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GRE作文自我批改方法介紹

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缺乏權(quán)威手段來批改自己的GRE作文是很多考生在備考中面臨的問題。寫好文章沒人批,如何發(fā)現(xiàn)問題進(jìn)行改進(jìn)?下面小編來為大家介紹一些比較可行的自我批改方法,給大家提供一些幫助和參考。

GRE作文自我批改方法介紹

找朋友幫忙批改

相信不少正在發(fā)愁GRE作文怎么打分的考生都很少會考慮這個(gè)方法。如果要找人批改,大家肯定都會更傾向找那些更專業(yè)權(quán)威的人士來幫助,比如大學(xué)教授,或者專業(yè)英文作家等等。但是,有時(shí)候來自朋友的幫助卻也能收到奇效。旁觀者清,許多你自己注意不到的拼寫錯(cuò)誤、語法錯(cuò)誤和文章結(jié)構(gòu)上的問題,在他人的眼里卻是再明顯不過。如果你的朋友中有誰具備一定的英語讀寫能力,那么尋求他們的幫助來批改作文也不失為一個(gè)好辦法。

當(dāng)然,既然是找朋友幫忙,自然可以提出一些特殊要求。你不妨告訴他們這篇文章是在30分鐘內(nèi)寫完的,因此批改時(shí)不要太過糾結(jié)于高水準(zhǔn)嚴(yán)要求,只要找找語法結(jié)構(gòu)、邏輯問題或者舉例上的錯(cuò)誤即可。批改的最終目的還是以找到一些比較明顯的問題為主。

參考范文做對比

雖然找人批改不容易,但GRE高分范文還是很容易找到的。只要花費(fèi)些許時(shí)間在網(wǎng)上搜索一下,想必大家都能找到不少高分滿分的GRE作文范文。而由于GRE作文題目相對比較固定,大家可以找一些題目相同的高分范文,和自己的作品做一些對比,通過比較寫作手法結(jié)構(gòu)用詞造句等各個(gè)方面,應(yīng)該能發(fā)現(xiàn)一些問題和不足,也是一種不錯(cuò)的自我批改途徑。

其他批改資源

另一種比較簡單省事的批改途徑,也許很多人都沒注意過,那就是WORD。把你完成的作文復(fù)制黏貼到WORD里,各種拼寫語法錯(cuò)誤瞬間在小綠線的提示下顯露無疑。當(dāng)然,這種方法只能用來修改拼寫和語法等基礎(chǔ)問題。但GRE作文評分中同樣有對于這些基礎(chǔ)的評分要求,而且往往會有0.5到1分的分值。因此,如果對自己的基本功沒有太大把握,或者因?yàn)閷懽鲿r(shí)間緊張容易出現(xiàn)手誤,那么求助WORD,同樣是值得考慮的選擇。

由此可見,其實(shí)給自己改GRE作文的方法還是有不少的。希望大家能夠從中找到一些批改途徑,練好GRE作文,在考試中寫出滿意的文章。

GRE寫作常見語法錯(cuò)誤匯總

不一致問題

所謂不一致不光指主謂不一致,還包括了單復(fù)數(shù)不一致、時(shí)態(tài)不一致以及代詞不一致等。比如:When one have money, he can do what he want to.

分析:one是第三人稱單數(shù),因此本句的have應(yīng)改為has; want應(yīng)改為wants, 本句是典型的主謂不一致。

改為:When one has money, he can do what he wants (to do).

修飾語錯(cuò)位

英語與漢語不同,同一個(gè)修飾語置于句子不同的位置,句子的含義可能引起變化。對于這一點(diǎn)考生們往往沒有引起足夠的重視,因而造成了不必要的誤解。比如:I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus.

分析:better位置不當(dāng),應(yīng)置于句末。

句子不完整

在口語中,交際雙方可借助手勢語氣上下文等,不完整的句子完全可以被理解??墒菚嬲Z就不同了,句子結(jié)構(gòu)不完整會令意思表達(dá)不清,這種情況常常在主句寫完以后,作者又想加些補(bǔ)充說明時(shí)發(fā)生。比如:There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on.

分析:本句后半部分"For example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on.”不是一個(gè)完整的句子,僅為一些不連貫的詞語,不能獨(dú)立成句。

改為:There are many ways to know society, for example, by TV, radio, and newspaper.

懸垂修飾語

所謂懸垂修飾語是指句首的短語與后面句子的邏輯關(guān)系混亂不清。比如:At the age of ten, my grandfather died. 這句中"at the age of ten"只寫出十歲時(shí),但沒有說明“誰”十歲時(shí),按一般推理不可能是my grandfather, 如果我們把這個(gè)懸垂修飾語改得明確一點(diǎn),讀者或考官在讀句子時(shí)就不會誤解了。

改為:When I was ten, my grandfather died.

詞性誤用

“詞性誤用”常表現(xiàn)為:介詞當(dāng)動詞用;形容詞當(dāng)副詞用;名詞當(dāng)動詞用等。比如:None can negative the importance of money.

分析:negative系形容詞,誤作動詞。

改為:None can deny the importance of money.

以上就是GRE寫作中常見的各類語法錯(cuò)誤匯總,希望大家能夠在寫作時(shí)加強(qiáng)注意,避免此類錯(cuò)誤的發(fā)生。

TIPS:GRE寫作用詞的選擇

寫作中用詞不準(zhǔn)確是很容易犯的毛病,good,terrible,see,nice,kind,greatly,think,know,something等詞匯在考生作文中反復(fù)出現(xiàn)。這些詞本身并沒有問題,是英語常用詞,但是它們表達(dá)的意思過于模糊,很多情況下,應(yīng)該使用意義更加準(zhǔn)確的詞。況且,總是使用這幾個(gè)詞會給人以表達(dá)形式單調(diào),詞匯量貧乏,文章缺乏感染力的印象。下面的一些例子,通過換用一、兩個(gè)準(zhǔn)確生動的詞語或是運(yùn)用一些固定搭配及習(xí)語就使整個(gè)句子增色不少。

GRE寫作突破低分桎梏建議分享

詞匯

很多考生都會糾結(jié)的一個(gè)問題是,究竟需不需要在寫作前背完紅寶書的單詞。答案是不需要。紅寶書的單詞是針對語文部分搜集整理的,與作文的關(guān)系不大。作文需要的詞匯仍然是那幾個(gè),therefore, however, admittedly。機(jī)器或者考官一見,馬上會鎖定,懂得寫議論文,就靠它們幾個(gè)。另外一些常用動詞名詞等實(shí)詞的同義詞要多背幾組,英語的修辭不在華麗,而在于變化。句型要多變,表達(dá)同種意思的詞當(dāng)然也不能重復(fù)。本來就單調(diào)的英語,重復(fù)是大忌。

模板

作文模板怎么用,不是不用,而是要合理利用。因?yàn)檫@實(shí)在是一個(gè)可以讓初學(xué)者一目了然,直奔主題的好東西。什么是結(jié)構(gòu),模板就是結(jié)構(gòu)。模板是骨架,是支撐,但不是靈魂。靈魂的部分當(dāng)然是文章的主旨,要靠自己在不懈的寫作,不斷的鉆研中去摸索和尋找的。千萬不可以依賴模板。一篇沒有靈魂的骨架子是沒法得高分的。

練習(xí)

練習(xí)是一定要堅(jiān)持的,整個(gè)備考過程中從始至終都要堅(jiān)持練習(xí)寫作。量變到質(zhì)變的突破需要時(shí)間積累,作文從來沒有一蹴而就的捷徑可走。

臨考

臨考前的??际菫榱俗尨蠹胰グ盐諘r(shí)間,更好的進(jìn)一步的查缺補(bǔ)漏。在考場上,更是要臨危不亂,無論出現(xiàn)什么樣的題目,相信自己,都是見過的,萬變不離其宗,這當(dāng)然需要練習(xí)時(shí)不斷去完善自己的知識庫。

突破GRE作文低分桎梏,每位考生需要找到的切入點(diǎn)也許各有不同,但關(guān)鍵還是在于對自身在寫作方面存在的問題和不足有充分的認(rèn)識,在此基礎(chǔ)上結(jié)合本文內(nèi)容進(jìn)行訓(xùn)練,相信大家都能有寫出高分滿分作文的那一天。

TIPS:GRE寫作要注意時(shí)間安排

GRE寫作要求考生在兩個(gè)30分鐘的時(shí)間內(nèi)分別完成一篇ARGUMENT文章和一篇ISSUE文章的寫作,考生需要在30分鐘內(nèi)完成從讀題審題到寫完全文的工作,時(shí)間上的要求可謂相當(dāng)緊迫。為了在短暫的時(shí)間內(nèi)寫出優(yōu)質(zhì)的文章,考生需要學(xué)會合理安排寫作的時(shí)間,用多少時(shí)間看題、構(gòu)思、列提綱、寫文章。每個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)都需要進(jìn)行詳細(xì)的安排并通過備考進(jìn)行練習(xí),把時(shí)間管理和控制能力練好。

GRE寫作優(yōu)秀范文:主觀和客觀

題目:

There is no such thing as purely objective observation.All observation is subjective;it is always guided by the observer's expectations or desires.

純粹客觀的觀察是不存在的。所有的觀察都是主觀的;觀察總是被觀察者的預(yù)期或者喜好所左右的。

正文:

The writer of the issue focuses his/her attention on the detail and extremely stares at the minutia, blinding to the main part of the problem. According to my feeling, the issue is ramshackle to deliberate.

Following the author's logic that all observations are distorted by observer's expectations or desires, all things in the world are unsuitable for meanings that is endowed by human language. If so, can the clean water be called clean? If we fetch a drop of water from a cup of clean water and then observe it under a microscope, many kinds of impurity can be dectected; can a brave man be a real brave one? Sometimes,even the bravest general may get worried: he/she worries that his army maight be conquered by the rival, he/she worries about the situation of his/her country, he/she worries about his/her familily. If all languages should be as accurate to depict things in the world as the inicial appearence of them, there might be no language nowadays.

"Pure" and "impure", "brave"and "craven", "clean" and "dirty", are just three pairs of relative conceptions. It is impossible to portray degree of the pure so accurate that completely the same with its original shape, as there is no absolute pure in the world at all. In the sense, those who are brave in some aspects may be not so brave, water that are clean in the sight of some people may be regarded as dirty. One who doesn't behave very well in the army but can exert his/her gift in research and holds the courage to clime to the pinnale of science, may be regared as craven in the army while considered as hero in science; water which is clean for drinking may not be clean enough for injection. In different places and for different people, definition of the same conception may be largely different.

However, the author of the issue considers that if there are observer's expectations or desires, observation is subjective. It means that if there is impurity in the pure, the pure things are impure. If the hero behaves quail under any circumstance, the hero is unsuitable for the coronal of "hero". We should concern more on the mainstream of an object, not the minor detail. Those who have been always brave or in his/her paticular fields embody a spirit that is lacked for others, they can be entitled with brave man too.

In the same sense, those water that is clean for its utility, it is also clean water. Only impurities in the water exceeds the standard, can we define it as "dirty water".Unavoidable, observation is always guided by the observer's expectations or desires,however, we should discriminate objective observation and sujective observation. It is arbitrary to conclude that all observations are sujective, taking no background into accout. Observation that is guided by the observer's expectations or desires under the normal lever is still the objective observation.


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