高一英語寫作技巧
高一英語寫作技巧
不論我們是讀高一還是高三，英語寫作的技巧性的知識(shí)我們都需要了解一些。下面是學(xué)習(xí)啦小編給大家整理的高一英語寫作技巧，供大家參閱!
高一英語寫作技巧
一.掌握簡單句的轉(zhuǎn)換方法
1. Xiaoming is a middle school student. He is a student of Beijing No: 80 High School. He is good at English and other subjects. He likes basketball and badminton. He often helps me with my English. He is often praised by our teachers. He makes progress every day.
2. Xiaoming is a middle school student. He studies in Beijing No. 80 High School. His English is very good and he’s good at other subjects. His favorite sports are basketball and badminton. He often helps us learn English. The teachers often praise him. He makes progress every day.
3. Xiaoming is a middle school student, studies in Beijing No. 80 High School. He does well in English as well as in other subjects. What's more, he likes basketball and badminton. In his spare time he often does us a favor to learn English, so our teachers often praise him
一、 轉(zhuǎn)換句子結(jié)構(gòu)
例1: 李東住在南方。他的家鄉(xiāng)經(jīng)常下雨。
一般：Li Dong lives in the south. It often rains in his hometown.
較好：Li Dong is from the south. There is a lot of rain in his hometown.
例2：你每天幫我學(xué)英語。你太好了!
一般：You help me study English every day. You are very kind.
較好：It's very kind of you to help me learn English every day.
較好：How nice of you to help me learn English every day!
二、 轉(zhuǎn)換句型
例：你女兒的數(shù)學(xué)成績很好。你不必為她擔(dān)憂。
一般：Your daughter is good at math. You needn't worry about her.
較好：Your daughter does well in math. There is no need for you to, worry about her. 較好：How well your daughter does in math!It's unnecessary for you to worry about her.
寫作中常用于轉(zhuǎn)換的三個(gè)重點(diǎn)句型：
1. there+be句型
there+be句型也是簡單句中的一種常用句型，在作文中經(jīng)常使用。在there+be句型中，謂語部分還可以換用there seems/seemed to be(似乎有)，there happened to be(碰巧有)，there may/might be(也許有)，there must be(肯定有)，there can't be(不可能有)，
there ought to/should be(應(yīng)該有)等。例如：
(1)我的家鄉(xiāng)經(jīng)常下雨。
There is a lot of rain in my hometown.=It often rains in my hometown.
(2)今天是星期天。學(xué)校不可能有學(xué)生。
It's Sunday today. There can't be any students in school.
(3)操場上碰巧有很多人。
There happened to be a lot of people on the playground.
2.感嘆句
感嘆句是作文中很有用的一種句型，常見的感嘆句有兩種。
感嘆句型1：How+形容詞或副詞十主謂結(jié)構(gòu)+感嘆號(hào)
感嘆句型2：What+(冠詞)+形容詞+名詞+主謂結(jié)構(gòu)+感嘆號(hào)
例如：
(1)How beautiful the park is!
(2)How fast the player runs!
(3)What an interesting film(it is)!=How interesting a film(it is)!
(4)What cold weather(it is)!
3.強(qiáng)調(diào)句型
強(qiáng)調(diào)句型也是作文中常用的一種句型，強(qiáng)調(diào)句型的結(jié)構(gòu)是：
It is/was+被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分十that/who+原句其他部分+句號(hào)。例如：
The boy cleaned the classroom yesterday.
(1)It was the classroom that the boy cleaned yesterday.(強(qiáng)調(diào)賓語)
(2) It-was the boy who/that cleaned the classroom yesterday.(強(qiáng)調(diào)主語)
(3) It was yesterday that the boy cleaned the classroom.(強(qiáng)調(diào)狀語)
高一英語寫作秘訣
一：首先介紹一些偷懶小技巧:
1.首先就是very這個(gè)單詞，以后不要再用了，弄哪個(gè)那，extraordinary!這個(gè)單詞高中生會(huì)用的不多，不用掌握什么用法，就記住用very的地方都可以替換成這個(gè)，絕對比用very拉風(fēng)! 然后那，however這個(gè)單詞不知道你們掌握得好不好，教大家一個(gè)玩賴的技巧，一個(gè)句子+逗號(hào)+however+另一個(gè)句子，這里面however是沒有實(shí)際意義的，就是表轉(zhuǎn)折，但你可以用這招把兩個(gè)簡單句捏在一塊啊!短句子成長句了! 第三個(gè)，第三個(gè)，就是把很簡單的句子，用一點(diǎn)小技巧，改成比較無恥的倒裝句!舉個(gè)例子，我不光唱歌，而且跳舞怎么說?i not onle sing,but also dance，改動(dòng)一下，not only do i sing,but also dance.倒裝句!
2.important?這是土人用的!牛人用什么?牛人用significant!由于怎么說?as a result?土人!牛人用什么?牛人用as a consequence. 所以怎么說?so?土人!牛人怎么說?牛人用therefore!(別看therefore這個(gè)單詞簡單，知道用它代替so的同學(xué)不多啊!)舉個(gè)例子，I got up
early，therefore i waslate. 類似的替換的單詞很多，比如以后set這個(gè)單詞不要用了，替換成establish。 越來越好怎么說? 土人也許會(huì)用better and better，牛人只用一個(gè)單詞：enhance 造個(gè)句子 we need to enhanceour English，就等于better and better。
3.好怎么說?土人用good，比他們強(qiáng)一點(diǎn)的人也許會(huì)用great ， wonderful，但牛人用什么?牛人用gorgeous，更牛的人用fabulous，簡單的替換一下，水平立刻顯現(xiàn)出不一樣了。不想要怎么說?土人會(huì)用unwanted，牛人用unsatisfactory。改變怎么說?土人用change，牛人用transform。類似的替換技巧有很多。
二.以上的問題解決了，我們來說一下語法，從句。相信很多同學(xué)掌握的不是很好，我教大家一些簡單的技巧?首先弄清句子的最主要成分是什么?主語加謂語。不管大家寫多復(fù)雜的句子，一定記住不管寫多復(fù)雜的句子，沒有謂語動(dòng)詞不叫句子!接下來具體地說語法的技巧
·有一個(gè)很簡單的從句，叫賓語從句，I think that...... 沒有人不會(huì)用吧，不過我奉勸大家盡量別這么用，老師批10張卷子看到了8張里面有I think that不煩嗎?如果一定要用賓語從句的話換一
種說法：I have a thought that......別看只改動(dòng)了一點(diǎn)，同位語從句!同樣I hear that誰都會(huì)用吧，不過同樣誰都會(huì)用所以我們不要用!厲害一些的人會(huì)用：It is reported that...... 不過真正的牛人用There is a piece of news that 同樣的意思，但明顯比I hear that要帥! 還有一種從句叫定語從句很多人也愿意用，不過我建議大家不要用，因?yàn)槠鋵?shí)在英語里，定語從句是種挺笨的句子，沒人說的!不過如果大家非要用我教大家一個(gè)必殺!很少有人知道的!其實(shí)定語從句是可以并列排比的!這招湊字?jǐn)?shù)最好使，寫出來也挺酷的。這招湊字?jǐn)?shù)最好使，寫出來也挺酷的。舉個(gè)例子，我喜歡玩籃球，然后籃球有很多種特點(diǎn)，就可以把這些特點(diǎn)用定語從句的形式并列出來：I love basketball，which is......，which is......，which is.......其實(shí)在上千年前，我們的老祖宗就會(huì)這么用了，大家學(xué)過韓愈的師說吧，里面有句話：師者，所以傳道授業(yè)解惑也。這就是個(gè)經(jīng)典的定語從句，翻譯過來就是teacher is a job who傳道，who授業(yè)and who 解惑。寫出來大大提升英語水平。
.還有種用法叫后置定語有人感覺挺難吧，其實(shí)記住個(gè)例子就行了，穿著比基尼的女孩a girl who wears a bikini，變成a girls wearing a bikini就行了，這就是后置定語，很簡單吧
三·語法的問題解決了，接下來就教大家一些細(xì)節(jié)地方上的技巧。
1.首先因?yàn)槭裁丛趺凑f?because 絕大多數(shù)人都用這個(gè)單詞，教大家一個(gè)很絕的用法，逗號(hào)+for 就可以代替because!舉個(gè)例子，我總聽李孝利的歌，因?yàn)槲蚁矚g李孝利：I often hear the songs of 李孝利，for i love her 中間的逗號(hào)+for就相當(dāng)于because，同樣，掌握這個(gè)用法的同學(xué)不多!
2.盡管怎么說?土人們although，而牛人用In spite of 舉個(gè)例子，盡管你是女生你也不能欺負(fù)我!In spite of thefact that you are 女生，you can't 欺負(fù) me!
時(shí)間狀語大家掌握的都不錯(cuò)吧，一看到她媽媽，小女生一下就哭了，用when就是土人!直接寫seeing her mother，zhe girl cried。還有首先是first吧，以后大家可以寫first and foremost，和first一個(gè)意思，但看上去高深的多。另外，用到這個(gè)用法時(shí)還可以用到一個(gè)簡單的插入結(jié)構(gòu) 主語，first and foremost，謂語這就是一個(gè)插入結(jié)構(gòu)，我在前面還講了一個(gè)however吧，這個(gè)單詞放到句子中是沒什么意義的，就是為了裝酷!同樣可以用到這：主語，however，謂語插入結(jié)構(gòu)!有一個(gè)句式說：“…for the simple reason that…”表示某種現(xiàn)象的原因是什么。然而，很多同學(xué)一談到原
因仍然是“…because…”如果要表示“總是能夠”的概念，很多同學(xué)提筆就會(huì)寫can always，但理想的句子應(yīng)該是用雙重否定表示強(qiáng)烈的肯定，用never fail to。
3.注意英語中一些表達(dá)上的習(xí)慣。比如在正式文體的寫作中，很少用 “it isn’t”這樣的略縮形式，而是 “it is not”。同理，在正式文體中的日期一般不縮寫，阿拉伯?dāng)?shù)字一般會(huì)用英文表達(dá)(特別長的數(shù)字除外)。
4.許多同學(xué)在寫作文時(shí)，習(xí)慣于把 “since” “because” “for”這樣的詞放在句首引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句。事實(shí)上，在我們見到的英語報(bào)刊雜志文章中，這樣的從句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被誤放在一句話的開頭，表示兩個(gè)句子之間的并列或遞進(jìn)關(guān)系。其實(shí)，經(jīng)常留心地道的英語文章能發(fā)現(xiàn)，如果是并列關(guān)系，完全可以不用連詞;如果是遞進(jìn)關(guān)系，用 “furthermore”“what is more”更為普遍
高一英語寫作方法
三、轉(zhuǎn)換詞語
例1：杰克是我們學(xué)校的學(xué)生。他學(xué)習(xí)特別努力。
一般：Jack studies in our school. He studies very hard.(重復(fù)studies)
較好：Jack studies in our school. He works hard at his lessons.
例2：媽媽匆匆忙忙去上班，連早餐都沒吃。
一般：Mother went to work. She didn't have breakfast.
較好：Mother went to work without having breakfast.(內(nèi)部結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，有一氣呵成之感)
例3：湯姆努力學(xué)習(xí)中文。他想在中國找份工作。
一般：Tom studies Chinese very hard. He wants to find a job in China.
較好：Tom studies Chinese very hard in order to/so as to find a job in China.
較好：Tom studies Chinese very hard with the purpose of finding a job in China. 段落練筆1
小朋一家有五個(gè)人。他們都有自己的愛好。他的父母喜歡打羽毛球。爺爺奶奶喜歡晚飯后散步。小朋喜歡集郵。幾乎每天晚上，小朋的爺爺奶奶都給他講故事。他們過著幸福的生活。
一般表達(dá)
Xiaopeng's family has five people. They all have their hobbies. His parents like badminton. His grandparents like to have a walk after supper. Xiaopeng likes collecting stamps. His grandparents tell him a story almost every evening. They live a happy life. 高級(jí)表達(dá)
There are five people in Xiaopeng's family，including him. All of them have their own hobbies. For example，his parents like badminton and his grandparents enjoy walking after supper.Collecting stamps is Xiaopeng’s hobby and to his great joy，his grandparents tell him a story almost every day in the evening. What a happy life they lead!
三大亮點(diǎn)1.主語的表達(dá)要多樣化。如：All of them 還可用both of them, both his father and mother, they each like, each of them
2.謂語的表達(dá)靈活。如：like, enjoy還可用 be fond of, go in for等表達(dá)。
3.簡單句的句型變換多樣。如：there be句型，動(dòng)名詞做主語，感嘆句。還可用倒裝句，強(qiáng)調(diào)句。
段落練筆2
我們學(xué)校是一所新建的寄宿制高中，又大又漂亮，非?，F(xiàn)代化。我以前從未見過如此好的學(xué)校。學(xué)校有2 000多名學(xué)生，150余名老師。老師待我們既嚴(yán)格又友好。我們的課堂生動(dòng)有趣，我們的校園生活豐富多彩。我愛我們的學(xué)校。
一般表達(dá)
Our school is a newly built boarding high school. It is large and beautiful. It is quite modern. I have never seen such a nice school before. Our school has more than 2 000 students and more than 150 teachers. Our teachers are strict and friendly to us. Our classes are lively and interesting. Our school life is rich and colourful. I really like our new school.
高級(jí)表達(dá)
Our school is a newly built boarding high school. It is large and beautiful. Of course it is quite modern. To tell you the truth，never have I seen such a nice school before. There are more than 2 000 students in our school. And our teachers，over 150，are strict but friendly to all of
us. To our great joy，not only our classes are lively and interesting，but also our school life is rich and colourful. How I like our school!
亮點(diǎn)：1. 句型多樣。感嘆句和倒裝句的使用，“從未見過”和“多末熱愛”采用感嘆句和倒裝句的表達(dá)
三、 運(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換簡單句
例1：這兒的人都喜歡湯姆寫的那本小說。
原句：All the people here like the novel. It is written by Tom.
轉(zhuǎn)換：All the people here like the novel written by Tom.(過去分詞做定語)
例2：這是一家工廠。月產(chǎn)成千上萬輛小汽車。
原句：This is a factory. It produces thousands of cars a month.
轉(zhuǎn)換：This is a factory，producing thousands of cars a month.(現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語) 例3：消防隊(duì)員及時(shí)趕到。他們對我們幫助很大。
原句：The firefighters came here in time. They helped us a lot.
轉(zhuǎn)換：The firefighters' coming here in time helped us a lot.(動(dòng)名詞做主語)
例4：我們應(yīng)該多講英語。我們認(rèn)為這是很重要的。
原句：We should speak more English. We think it is very important.
轉(zhuǎn)換：We think it very important to speak more English.(不定式做真正賓語) 例5：我們應(yīng)該如何提高我們的英語口語水平?這是個(gè)問題。
原句：How should we improve our spoken English? It is a question.
轉(zhuǎn)換：(1)How to improve our spoken English is a question.(不定式短語做主語)
(2) The question is how to improve our spoken English.(不定式短語做表語)
二、運(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞轉(zhuǎn)換復(fù)合句
例1：這里曾有一家化肥廠，位于城市的南邊。它每夭釋放出大量有毒氣體，污染環(huán)境。
原句：There was a large factory, which produced fertilizer. Every day it gave out a lot of poisonous gas，which polluted the environment.
轉(zhuǎn)換：There was a large factory, which produced fertilizer. Every day it gave out a lot of poisonous gas，polluting the environment.(現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語)
例2：當(dāng)我們趕到校門口時(shí)，已經(jīng)8點(diǎn)了。我們見到老師時(shí)，不得不為遲到而向她道歉。
原句：When we got to the school gate it was eight. When we saw our teacher，we had to say sorry for our being late.
轉(zhuǎn)換：When we got to the school gate it was eight. Seeing our teacher, we had to say sorry for our being late.(現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語)
例3：我們認(rèn)為中學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)一門外語是必要的。同時(shí)我們也認(rèn)為，中學(xué)生掌握一門外語是可能的。
原句：We think it is necessary that middle school students should learn a foreign language and we also think that it is possible that they can master one.
轉(zhuǎn)換：We think it is necessary that middle school students should learn a foreign language and we also think it possible for them to master one.(不定式做真正賓語) 例4：由于老師的幫助，我英語進(jìn)步了。因?yàn)槲矣⒄Z進(jìn)步了，我相信我能考上更好的大學(xué)。
原句：Because my teacher helps me, my English has greatly improved. Because my English has greatly improved，I'm sure I will go to a better university.
轉(zhuǎn)換：With my teacher helping me，my English has greatly improved. Because my English has greatly improved，I’m sure I will go to a better university.
例5：為了趕上同班同學(xué)，李東不遺余力地學(xué)習(xí)。為了好好學(xué)習(xí)，他從不玩電腦游戲。
原句：Li Dong spares no effort to study so that he can catch up with his classmates. He never plays computer games so that he can learn better.
轉(zhuǎn)換：Li Dong spares no effort to study so that he can catch up with his classmates. He never plays computer games so as to learn better.(不定式做狀語)
There are a large number of taxi drivers in Beijing. They serve passengers heart and soul. They play an important part in the traffic of Beijing. They make some money. They work from dawn till night. One day，I left my cellphone in the taxi I took. I got in touch with the driver.
He drove to my home and gave it back to me. I was very excited.
There are a large number of taxi drivers in Beijing，serving passengers heart and soul and playing an important part in the traffic of Beijing. In order to make some money to support their families，they work from dawn till night. One day，I got out of the taxi in a hurry with my cellphone left in the taxi I took. On hearing what had happened，the taxi driver drove to my home as fast as possible and gave the cellphone back to me. Seeing my cellphone again，I was too excited to say a word.
There are more and more tall buildings in big cities. Their prices are going up day by day.
On one hand，there are still lots of people. They have no houses to live in. On the other hand，
many apartments are hard to be sold out. Even if you buy an apartment，I'm afraid you have to
pay off the money you borrow from the bank. You will work hard day and night all your life. I
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hope our government take strong measures to solve the housing problem and take care of the
people. Their incomes are low.
There are more and more tall buildings in big cities，with their prices going up day by day.
On one hand，there are still lots of people having no houses to live in. On the other hand，many
apartments are hard to be sold out. Even if you have bought an apartment，I'm afraid you have
to try to pay off the money you borrow from the bank，working hard day and night all your life.
I do hope our government can take strong measures to solve the housing problem, showing great concern for the people whose incomes are not high enough.
參照模式
1.There was a discussion on/about(某方面)„last week. Some of us think(注意時(shí)態(tài))that... because... But others hold(注意時(shí)態(tài))quite different opinions. In their opinion,„
The discussion lasted over two hours，but we didn't come to an agreement.
2. We had a discussion on(某方面)„last Wednesday, but the opinions are(注意時(shí)態(tài))divided on the questions. Some think that if„sth will happen. What’s more，„Others
insist that„because they believe that... Besides，„
The discussion ended without any result. But in my opinion，„
范文
Recently，our class have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city.(引言，提出中心論點(diǎn))Some of my classmates are in favour of the move.(提出觀點(diǎn))They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams. They also say that once moved，the animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs.(論據(jù)，理由)However, other students are against the idea，(提出不同觀點(diǎn))saying that the Beijing Zoo，built in 1906，has a history of 100 years，and is well known at home and abroad. So it should remain where it is. What's more，moving may cause the death of some animals(論據(jù)，理由).To move or not, this is a big decision which has to be made by the people in Beijing.(簡要總結(jié))
常用句型
1 .There was a discussion on how to do...，which was held yesterday/last week.昨天/上星期舉行了一個(gè)某方面韻討論會(huì)。
例：There was a discussion on how to protect our environment，which was held in our class last Wednesday.
上星期三我們班舉行了一個(gè)“如何進(jìn)行環(huán)境保護(hù)”的討論會(huì)。
2 .Some of„think that...，because...，while the others have quite different views. In their opinion，„
一些人認(rèn)為„„因?yàn)?bdquo;„然而另一些人持不同意見。在他們看來„„(注意think/ believe等的時(shí)態(tài))
例：Some of us think that Senior 3 students should take exercise after school because they believe that progress or success depends on good health，while the others have quite different views. In their opinion，they needn't spend time on sports because they are too busy doing their homework every day.
一些人認(rèn)為，高三學(xué)生應(yīng)該參加體育鍛煉，因?yàn)檫M(jìn)步或成功依賴于健康的體魄;而另一些人則認(rèn)為，他們不必花時(shí)間進(jìn)行體育鍛煉，因?yàn)樗麄兠刻煲τ谧龃罅康淖鳂I(yè)。
3 .On one hand...，on the other hand.，.What's more，„
For one thing... for another... Besides，„
一方面„„另一方面„„而且„„
例：What a pity. I can’t go to your birthday party today. For one thing，I haven't finished my homework. For another，I'm not feeling well these days. What’s more，my mother doesn't allow me to take part in such parties，but I will send you a lovely birthday present tomorrow morning. Wish you a happy birthday!
真遺憾，我今天不能參加你的生日聚會(huì)。一方面，我的一大堆作業(yè)還沒有做完，另一方面，我這幾天身體很不舒服。而且我媽媽也不讓我參加這樣的活動(dòng)。不過，明天早晨我會(huì)送你一個(gè)可愛的生日禮物的。順祝生日快樂!
4 .The discussion lasted...，but they didn’t reach an agreement.
The discussion lasted...，but they didn't arrive at an agreement.
The discussion lasted...，but they didn't come to an agreement.
討論持續(xù)了(多長時(shí)間)，但沒有達(dá)成共識(shí)。
5.常用于發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)和看法的句型
(1) There is no doubt that...毫無疑問„„
(2)In general/Generally/Generally speaking，...一般來說，
(3)The chief reason why„is that...主要原因是„„
(4)It is said/reported that...據(jù)說/據(jù)報(bào)道„„
(5) It is hoped/ believed that...人們希望/相信„„
(6) It is known that... /Everybody knows that. . .眾所周知„„
(7) We must recognize that...我們必須認(rèn)識(shí)到„„
(8) We have reason to believe that...我們有理由相信„„
(9)Every coin has two sides.任何事都要一分為二。
(10) I'm sure/afraid that...我相信/恐怕„„
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