雅思8分作文感想 結(jié)尾技巧很重要
良好的開始是成功的一半，對(duì)于雅思作文考試來說也是如此。不過，雅思大作文的開頭很好，必然也需要有一個(gè)精彩的結(jié)尾才行，這樣才能讓閱卷老師眼前一亮。雖然雅思作文的分?jǐn)?shù)并不是取決于結(jié)尾段落，但是一個(gè)漂亮而干脆的結(jié)尾段還是會(huì)為文章增色不少，也會(huì)將前文出現(xiàn)的小瑕疵掩蓋掉，把大作文的分?jǐn)?shù)拿到最高。下面是小編為您收集整理的結(jié)尾技巧很重要，供大家參考!
雅思8分作文感想--結(jié)尾技巧很重要
招式一、回答問題answer thequestion
E.g. When a country develops its technology; the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good, I thinkit is by no means ‘ pointless’, in any way, to try to keep traditions alive with technology. We should not ignore technology, because it can be our friendand support our way of life.
這個(gè)結(jié)尾段落明確地提出了自己的觀點(diǎn)，不是所有的科技都是好的，但是科技也不是完全沒有用處的。
招式二、不添加新的信息not apply anynew information
E.g. Happiness is considered to be very important in life.Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Like self-awareness, this is also very difficult to achieve, but I think these are the two factors that may be the most important for achieving happiness.
用1句話明確自己的觀點(diǎn)，幸福很難定義，可能有兩個(gè)因素起到作用。
招式三、2-3個(gè)句子為宜 2-3 sentences are enough
E.g. Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational; otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?
Finally, Ithink it is also important to remember that children need to relax as well as work. If everything they do must have some educational or academic relevance,then they will soon get tired of studying altogether, which is the last thing parents would want.
2句話，作者的態(tài)度很明確，學(xué)生不可能花所有的時(shí)間去學(xué)習(xí)，否者就會(huì)完全失去對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)的興趣，所以也應(yīng)該給學(xué)生一些放松的時(shí)間。
一般在結(jié)尾段的最開始部分，考生就應(yīng)該給考官一個(gè)明確的信號(hào)詞，讓考官了解文章已經(jīng)進(jìn)入尾聲了。這里所謂的信號(hào)詞就是一些結(jié)尾段的套句：
信號(hào)詞：Finally, to sum up, inconclusion, in brief, therefore, thus, overall
句型：
1. it can be concludedthat…
2. we can findthat…
3. I think itis also important to remember that
4. the mainpoint is to make sure that
5. I believethat/ Personally, I think that/ I would say that/ I agree that/ My view is that
招式四：可采用以下技巧
1.總結(jié)式(重述前文)
把前文中的觀點(diǎn)再在結(jié)尾段進(jìn)行重述，但是不能重復(fù)與開頭段或者題目中的單詞。
E.g. In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the cause of this?What solutions can you suggest?
Perhaps parenting classes are needed to help them to do this, and high quality nursery schools could be established that would support families more in terms of rising the next generation. The government should fund this kind of parental support, because this is no longer a problem for individual families, but for society as a whole.
把solutions進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單的再次描寫--父母、好的托兒所、政府的資金扶助。
2.兩分式
把文章涉及到的主題人或者物分成兩種,對(duì)其進(jìn)行分別的說明。
E.g. In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this ad completely wrong,while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this?
Nevertheless,in better economic circumstances, few parents would choose to send their children out to full-time paid work. If learning responsibilities and work experience are considered to be important, then children can acquire these by having light, part-time jobs or even doing tasks such as helping their parents around the family home, which are unpaid, but undoubtedly of value in children's development.
對(duì)有錢的家庭而言，家長(zhǎng)很少送小孩去做童工;如果是為了錢或者其他，可做兼職。
3.折中式
很難判斷其中到底誰占據(jù)主導(dǎo)地位，或者什么是最重要的，兩者是缺一不可的，需共同存在。
E.g. Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life.
Either nature or nurture is the major influence on a person, but that both have powerfuleffects. How these factors interact is still unknown today and they remain largely unpredictable in a person's life.
兩者是缺一不可的，天賦和后天培養(yǎng)同等重要。
4.轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比式
提出另一種群體,與之相比,會(huì)產(chǎn)生什么效果來支持自己的觀點(diǎn)。
E.g. Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal of more money than people in other important professionals.Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
Personally, I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicates that our society places more value on sport than on more essential professions and achievements.
把運(yùn)動(dòng)員與其他方面的工作人員進(jìn)行對(duì)比——比上不足比下有余。
總之，如果要寫出一篇好的雅思作文一定要善始善終，這才是拿高分的黃金定律，希望考生們能夠根據(jù)上文的一些建議找到適合自己的結(jié)尾方式，得到理想的成績(jī)。
雅思小作文寫作實(shí)用黃金50句(一)
1.the table shows the changes in the number of...over the period from...to... 該表格描述了在...年之...年間...數(shù)量的變化。
2.the bar chart illustrates that... 該柱狀圖展示了...
3.the graph provides some interesting data regarding... 該圖為我們提供了有關(guān)...有趣數(shù)據(jù)。
4.the diagram shows (that)... 該圖向我們展示了...
5.the pie graph depicts (that).... 該圓形圖揭示了...
6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of... 這個(gè)曲線圖描述了...的趨勢(shì)。
7.the figures/statistics show (that)... 數(shù)據(jù)(字)表明...
8.the tree diagram reveals how... 該樹型圖向我們揭示了怎樣...
9.the data/statistics show (that)... 該數(shù)據(jù)(字)可以這樣理解...
10.the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that... 這些數(shù)據(jù)資料令我們得出結(jié)論...
11.as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table... 如圖所示...
12.according to the chart/figures... 根據(jù)這些表(數(shù)字)...
13.as is shown in the table... 如表格所示...
14.as can be seen from the diagram,great changes have taken place in... 從圖中可以看出，...發(fā)生了巨大變化。
15.from the table/chart/diagram/figure,we can see clearly that...or it is clear/apparent from the chart that... 從圖表我們可以很清楚(明顯)看到...
16.this is a graph which illustrates... 這個(gè)圖表向我們展示了...
17.this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from...to... 該表格描述了...年到...年間a與b的比例關(guān)系。
18.the graph,presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in... 該圖以圓形圖形式描述了...總的趨勢(shì)。 19.this is a column chart showing... 這是個(gè)柱型圖，描述了...
20.as can be seen from the graph,the two curves show the flutuation of... 如圖所示，兩條曲線描述了...的波動(dòng)情況。
21.over the period from...to...the...remained level. 在...至...期間，...基本不變。
22.in the year between...and... 在...年到...期間...
23.in the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 1998... 1995年至1998三年里...
24.from then on/from this time onwards... 從那時(shí)起...
25.the number of...remained steady/stable from (month/year) to (month/year). ...月(年)至...月(年)...的數(shù)量基本不變。