英語高考作文之如何遣詞造句(2)
英語高考作文之如何遣詞造句
英語高考作文之如何遣詞造句(二)
1.改變句子開頭的方式。
可以適當?shù)匕岩恍┏煞?如狀語)提前，放在句子的開頭，這樣使整個句子讀起來跌宕起伏，增加書面表達的表現(xiàn)力。
(1)我今天早晨收到了你十月十八日的來信。
A：I received your letter which was written on October 18th this morning.(一般)
B：Your letter of October 18th reached me this morning.(優(yōu)秀)
(2)那個房子既黑暗又空蕩，跟我記得的形式不同。
A：The house was dark and empty.So it looked very different from the way I remembered it.(一般)
B：Dark and empty，the house looked very different from the way I remembered it.(優(yōu)秀)
2.使用一些表達感情的句式，如強調(diào)句、感嘆句、倒裝句等，增強語句的表現(xiàn)力。
(1)那是一部有趣的電影。
A：It is an interesting film.(一般)
B：What an interesting film it is!(優(yōu)秀)
C：How interesting a film it is!(優(yōu)秀)
(2)只是當他回來時我們才查明了真相。
A：We found out the truth when he returned.(一般)
B：We didn't find out the truth until he returned.(優(yōu)秀)
C：Only when he returned did we find out the truth.(優(yōu)秀)
3.句式多樣，復雜得體。
在寫作中應避免使用相同長度的相同句式，而應注意句式的變化，如長短句結(jié)合，簡單句、并列句與復合句共用;一些較復雜的結(jié)構(gòu)如獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)、分詞結(jié)構(gòu)等也可使用。
(1)他的父親是否能痊愈還是個問題。他為此非常焦慮不安。
A：He doesn't know whether his father will recover，so he is very upset.(一般)
B：Whether his father will recover is still a problem.And he is very upset.(簡單句與復合句共用)(優(yōu)秀)
(2)你每天幫我學英語。你太好了!
A：You help me study English every day.You are very kind.(一般)
B：It's very kind of you to help me learn English every day.(優(yōu)秀)
C：How kind of you to help me learn English every day!(優(yōu)秀)
練習
1. 選擇適當?shù)膯卧~填空
1.Don't read ________ the sunlight.(in/under)
2.He has a ________ body temperature.(high/hot)
3.She lives ________ and often feels ________.(alone/lonely)
4.I think the patient will get ________ soon.(good/well)
5.We________Christmas with a tree and many presents.(congratulate/celebrate)
2. 一句多譯
1.媽媽匆匆忙忙上班去了，連早飯都沒吃。
Mother went to work hurrily;she didn't have breakfast.
=Mother went to work ____________.She didn't have breakfast.
=Mother went to work in a hurry ____________ breakfast.
2.我寧愿呆在家里也不愿去看電影。
I prefer ____________ at home rather than ____________ the film.
=I prefer ____________ at home to ____________ the film.
=I would rather ________ at home than go to see the film.
3.我們到達農(nóng)場時，受到了農(nóng)民的熱烈歡迎。
When we got to the farm，we were given a warm welcome by the farmers.
=When__________ the farm，we__________a warm welcome from the farmers.
=On________________，wewere ________________ by the farmers.
3. 句型轉(zhuǎn)換
1.She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.(使用過去分詞)
=___________________________________________________________.
2.I won't believe what he says.(使用狀語從句)
=___________________________________________________________.
3.He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.(使用倒裝句改寫)
=___________________________________________________________.