怎么改英語作文

　　想要體高英語作文寫作水平在原有的基礎上進行修改提升是非常有效的辦法，下面小編就跟你們分享下怎么修改英語作文

 

　　一、英語作文的等級

 

　　四檔文：內(nèi)容不完整，語言表述錯誤很多，不能完整地表達思想。可得0-2分

 

　　三檔文：內(nèi)容完整，重點描述合理，但表述不充分，層次結(jié)構(gòu)不合理，語言不夠流暢，字跡不夠工整，5-6  處語法或拼寫錯誤；字數(shù)不足。可得3-5分

 

　　二檔文：內(nèi)容完整，重點描述比較充分，層次結(jié)構(gòu)比較清晰，語言比較流暢，字跡工整，有3-4處語法或拼寫錯誤；字數(shù)符合要求?？傻?-8分

 

　　一檔文：內(nèi)容完整，重點描述清楚、合理，表達充分，層次結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，字跡工整，可讀性強，語言流暢，僅有1-2處語法或拼寫錯誤；字數(shù)符合要求?？傻?-10分

　　二、英語作文修改案例

 

　　案例一：

 

　　A Trip to the Zoo

 

　　原稿：

 

　　Yesterday way Sunday and it was a fine day.So I take a trip to the zoo. I went there by bus, I get there at 8:00 am.There are many people.and some people watched the tigers ,some watched the monkeys, Others watched the bids,I saw many animals and I tool many phtos. That’s a interesting trip. I’ll never forget it. That’s  my trip.

 

　　修改后：

 

　　It was a sunny Sunday  After a quick breakfast , I couldn’t wait to get on the bus. This is my first time to enjoy a trip alone. Varions lovebal animals are waiting in the zoo!

 

　　As soon as I got there,  I was attracted at once.  Monkeys were climbing in the tree happily. Sometimes they even came to fetch the bananas in visitors’hands. How naughty they were! What’s more, I was also intersted in the tigers. They are called “the king of animals”,but at this moment they were lying quetly ,maybe they were sleepy. Animals ,humanbeings ,we live in a world .we are family . I t came to my mind immiediatly.

 

　　Anyway, I had an interesting trip today . It gave me a deep impression, I’ll never forget it.

 

　　案例二：

 

　　My favourite season

 

　　原稿：

 

　　There are four seasons in a year. And my favourite season is summer. Although it’s very hot. I still love it .Because I can swim in the sea .And lie in sun . That’s very comfortable.And I also can eat some Icecreams.they are delicious so there’re lots of thingd to do in summer. That’s  very intersting. So I love summer. That’s my favourite season.

 

　　修改后

 

　　My favourite season

 

　　As is all know , there are four seasons. Speaking of my favourite , summer comes first although it is hot.

 

　　Many things can be done in summer such as swimming in the sea, Lying on the beach  … How comfortable ! More importantly  I can eat delicious Icecream . Of course, we also enjoy beautiful views outside. And I’m always looking forward to going fishing with my father .

 

　　In a word ,summer is my favourite season because it brings me a lot of happiness .

 

　　三、英語作文修改的注意事項

 

　　1、整篇文章邏輯的修改.作文的目的是為了表達東西,所以首先要確保作文表達的內(nèi)容是清楚并且符合邏輯的,如果段落之間都是矛盾的就說不過去了.

 

　　2、語法的修改篇章與段落的修改過后看句子的結(jié)構(gòu),說仔細了就是語法的修改.

 

　　3、還有就是單詞拼寫等小細節(jié)的修改了.